Snowed In With the Mountain Ranger Who Can't Stand Tourists
A blizzard, one cabin, one stove, and a grumpy rescue ranger who said 'tourists' like a curse. The pass reopens in seven days. you and Hal have to survive each other first.
About the story
You came to the village of Shirakaze for a quiet winter week: hot springs, mountain views, maybe a photograph of the famous frozen waterfall that everyone says you shouldn't hike to in January. You hiked to it anyway. The storm came in faster than the forecast. One minute the sky was pale blue, the next you couldn't see your own gloves. You remember snow up to your knees, a twisted ankle, the cold settling in, and then a bright orange coat, a lamp swinging through the white and a deep, very irritated voice saying, "Of course. Of course it's a tourist." His name is Haruki Takamine. Everyone calls him Hal. He's the senior ranger of the Shirakaze Mountain Rescue Station, a tall man with wind-burned cheeks, a scar through one eyebrow and the patience of a glacier that has run out of patience. He carried you half a kilometer to the only shelter within reach: Ranger Cabin Seven, a small wooden hut halfway up the mountain with one wood stove, one table, two narrow bunks, a radio, a shelf of dog-eared paperbacks, and a fat old rescue dog named Mochi who immediately decided you are her favorite person. Then the avalanche came down across the pass road behind you. The radio crackles with the news from Noor Castellan, the station's cheerful dispatcher and Hal's oldest friend: the snowplows can't reach Cabin Seven for at least seven days. There's enough firewood, enough rice and canned curry, and exactly one good blanket. Hal is not happy. Hal is very professional about not being happy. He made you a splint and a cup of tea without a word, he's mapped out a chore schedule on the wall, and he's announced that you are not, under any circumstances, to go outside, touch the radio or "be cheerful at me before coffee." But there are things you'll notice over seven snowbound days. He always gives Mochi the bigger half of his dinner. He hums while he chops wood and stops the instant he sees you watching. He keeps one battered photograph turned face-down on the shelf. Every night at nine he goes to the window and looks down the mountain at the lights of the village, and every night he checks the radio twice for a call that never comes. And there's a reason he hates tourists. Three winters ago, a hiker went past the warning signs during a storm, and Hal's mentor, old Ranger Ishida, went out to find them. Both came home, but Ishida's knee never healed and he never climbed again. Hal has been carrying that winter ever since. This is a slow-burn, wholesome romance, built on small moments: burnt rice, a card game with very serious rules, a frozen waterfall seen at dawn, a story told by stove-light, a hand held when the wind screams too loudly. The Warmth meter tracks how Hal feels about you, and it goes up through honesty, kindness and patience, not flattery. Day by day the storm outside gets worse, and the storm inside him slowly calms. On Day 7 the snowplows arrive and the pass reopens. You'll be free to leave. The question is whether either of you will want you to. Features: Slow Burn · Forced Proximity · Grumpy x Sunshine · 7-Day Blizzard · Warmth meter · Status panel every turn · A/B/C choices or type your own action · 3 endings · All characters are adults. Main cast • Haruki "Hal" Takamine, 29: Senior ranger of the Shirakaze Mountain Rescue Station. • Noor Castellan, 28: The Shirakaze Rescue Station dispatcher and Hal's oldest friend. • Mochi, 40: A fat, elderly white rescue dog who lives at Cabin Seven. How to start: begin with the main opening, or jump into an alternate start: The Card Game (Day 2, evening) · The Clear Night (Day 4, night) · The Radio Call (Day 5, afternoon). Every start shares the same world, trackers and endings.
About the world
Shirakaze is a small snowy mountain village famous for its hot springs, red lanterns and the frozen Shirakaze Falls. The Mountain Rescue Station sits at the edge of the village, and Ranger Cabin Seven is an emergency hut halfway up Mount Hakuro. Cabin Seven: one room, a cast-iron wood stove, a small kitchen corner, two narrow bunks, a table with a chessboard and a deck of cards, a shelf of old paperbacks, a two-way radio and a woodshed connected by a covered walkway. Outside: pine forest, deep snow and, on clear nights, a sky full of stars. The pass road is buried by an avalanche. Snowplows estimate seven days. Supplies: rice, canned curry, miso, tea, a tin of cookies someone hid behind the flour. Season: deep winter, a week-long blizzard with short clear spells.
Your place in this story
You're a visitor to Shirakaze (choose your name, look, job and personality; you're 20-35). You came for a quiet winter break and hiked to the frozen falls during a storm warning. Now you have a sprained ankle, a borrowed sweater three sizes too big, and seven days snowed in with a ranger who can't stand tourists. Why did you really come up the mountain alone in January? That's your story to tell, or keep.
Intro preview
The first thing you notice is warmth: a crackling stove, a thick wool blanket, the smell of pine smoke and green tea.
The second thing you notice is the very large, very white dog lying across your legs like a furry sandbag.
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